Tuesday, October 23, 2007
those of us who are left
hideous creatures with huge gaping mouths
swallow the ocean whole
those of us who are left
stare at the barren landscape
and
cry
© 2007 Jim Wittenberg
Sunday, October 21, 2007
the morning chill has arrived
memories baffle the monster
he remembers anger
and unforgiveness
sunbathing all summer in his backyard
now that the morning chill
has arrived
along with the cold wind
and the occasional threat of rain
they don't visit him
he wonders if they prefer a warmer
climate
or if they're too lazy
to help him prepare for winter
he notices that he feels better when
they're absent
© 2007 Jim Wittenberg
Monday, October 8, 2007
a mistake
the ending was a mistake
it lacked the excitement and action
a story needs
to conclude
properly
I should have written in a cannibalistic giant
or a fire-breathing dragon
it would have sprung from the middle
of the earth
and devoured
all the characters
so I rewrote it
it was one hundred percent
better
I changed the beginning
and the middle, too
© 2007 Jim Wittenberg
Tuesday, October 2, 2007
deep inside me
deep inside me are secrets
I want to keep deep inside me
the sun and moon reveal too much
I hide myself in the shadows
and these words
no one looks for me here
© 2007 Jim Wittenberg
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